hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,392 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Old Is - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

The legend says “not all that glitters is gold”
It also says ‘not all braves are bold”
But experience comes from passing of an age
There shall be intense urge to come out from the cage

So adopt the change that is necessary
The degree of wisdom may vary
Yet some goodness can be picked
Some of the old things are very much liked

Old things have its traditional values
We pay the due regards and view
Even old gold has less impurity
It stands above all in terms of quality

Ancient culture is adored still
As its roots are deep real
It stands for tolerance and peace
People were happy and lived at ease

Some of the traditional values are still continued
The respect for guest is still perused
He is given same respect as was in olden days
Even strangers were treated well in so many ways

In modern day, some of the old traditions are discarded
Even though some of the old achievements are respected
Old science still provides some clue in the field
Foreigners have gained a lot and high views are held


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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/20/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 11:43:00 PM)

    welcome rohani daud
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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 10:58:00 PM)

    welcome agam vora
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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 10:47:00 PM)

    Luz Joveres likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome luz
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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 9:21:00 PM)

    I like the message of traditions and it's a good write, aside from a few choices of words. I absolutely agree that we've lost a lot of what was good in the past but I also think we have come a long way from where we've been. I would like to see another side to this poem! Perhaps an evil twin write? Either way, good show. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    Hi

    Jace Mordigal13 minutes ago
    Hi (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    The legend says “not all that glitters is gold”
    It also says ‘not all braves are bold” (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014


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