Dark brown, with battered weather-beaten feathers,
he loves to perch on the railing at the building top
from his high seat surveying the world beneath him.
He's an old kite, positively past his prime
the wings worn out from having winged a good while
tired of soaring, weary of roaming, he comes to rest
at sunset time, while his tribe members are still at flight.
Does the evening sky's colour affect his mood too?
Does he regret age-diminished strength like I do?
Nice poem. Old age has been aptly compared with a worn out kite. Thanks for sharing the poem.
Not a bad start for your first poem. Thanks for sharing. I'll give you 10 points.
Thanks, Spock, for reading and giving high points. Much encouraged.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sublime start with a nice poem, Malsawmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.