Old Kite Poem by Malsawmi Jacob

Old Kite

Rating: 5.0


Dark brown, with battered weather-beaten feathers,
he loves to perch on the railing at the building top
from his high seat surveying the world beneath him.

He's an old kite, positively past his prime
the wings worn out from having winged a good while
tired of soaring, weary of roaming, he comes to rest
at sunset time, while his tribe members are still at flight.

Does the evening sky's colour affect his mood too?
Does he regret age-diminished strength like I do?

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: city,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Malsawmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2016

Nice poem. Old age has been aptly compared with a worn out kite. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Malsawmi Jacob 26 November 2016

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

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Spock The Vegan 20 November 2016

Not a bad start for your first poem. Thanks for sharing. I'll give you 10 points.

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Malsawmi Jacob 20 November 2016

Thanks, Spock, for reading and giving high points. Much encouraged.

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