The day you left, as I recall
You stood so high, you stood so tall
No wonder you couldn't hear me say
So high you were, so low I lay
Since she has left many have left
I wish if those promises were kept
My vision has now started to blur
My hairs have shown their true color
Once which were, as dark as black
Have started to grow, on my back
And some of them which couldn't change
Have left my skull and I look so strange
Since she has gone, I am a different man
Faster than usain bolt she ran
I saw her going from my eyes
Not a single word and no good byes
Now everything I see Is blue
From movies to monkeys of zoo
Every night is same, same is the day
I wish like you if I could play
All says now, that I am so rude
I hate myself when I see me nude
Everything I do, reminds me of you
My biceps have shrunk by an inch or two
I shut my eyes, I no longer sleep
I tell someone, he is a son of beep
Friends have turned into my foe
They call me now a crooked crow
Its summers time, and I feel so cold
Warm me my love, before I get old
Before I breakdown, before I sigh
You can always mend me with some lie
I love you now, I love you then
I love you like cock loves his hen
I love you no matter where you are
Till you see me in some star
Painful is the feeling, but great as it pushed you to poetry. Loved it.
Such honesty creating a bleak picture of a broken soul with a touch of comedy, amazing, outstanding write! !
full of emotion......go on....we, poemhunters r waiting for more poems frm u
wow...its really amazing....with painful words you opened your heart..the last line was so amazing i liked it very much... »so close«
Sad and honest with some tongue in cheek love, a good breakup poem with fun...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I enjoyed it. Just like pain described in a comic way. This is a nice way of telling or complaining and at the same time making it comic. I love it really. And some of them which couldn't change Have left my skull and I look so strange Very nice