Pradip Chattopadhyay

Silver Star - 3,267 Points (28.01.1961 / Kolkata)

On A Lifeless World - Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

From his glassed verandah
he stared in wonder at the motionless sky
with not a star twinkling,
he felt sadly amused,
the little stars don’t twinkle here
and he was so far away from the land
he had known all along as his home.
suddenly it dawned on him
that it wasn’t for no reason
that he felt rootless and homeless
in what was so long his abode
the same way he’s feeling now
in this glassed verandah
one fifty million miles away
from the place he calls home.
he shivered in this thought
looking at the vast frigid sky
where hurtled the ghost of phobos
whose pale orb he found too dimmed
to spin webs of dreams
he did with the silvery disc
in his once familiar sky.
at the sight of that desert terrain
exposed yet bereft of the wind’s ravage
where time stood timelessly frozen,
he felt lost in a massive alienness
listlessly searching for a way out
to come back to a tranquil equilibrium.

then his eyes fell on the ocean water blue
and he couldn’t hold back his tears.
like a man possessed
he started tapping the keys….

The first flower blossomed on that lifeless world.

Comments about On A Lifeless World by Pradip Chattopadhyay

  • Gold Star - 45,961 Points Valsa George (8/6/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem! Lost in a terrain where time stood timelessly frozen, where the silvery disc has faded into a pale orb and you looking at the frigid sky unable to weave any web of dreams! Great imagery! ! Enjoyed much! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,498 Points Neela Nath Das (8/3/2013 11:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful verse! A 10 of course. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Lucifera Santez (8/3/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    like it a lot.
    :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 30, 2013

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