On A Lonely Night Poem by Ash win

On A Lonely Night

Rating: 5.0


During nights as lonely as this
I walk down my Balcony
Looking for happiness
Where there is none
Not that am sad - That
I am not
Just not happy...

I Look far far away
For signs to make me smile
No sign of smile
No sign of light
Just a lot of darkness
And some more of it...

A few stars would do
Or a tiny moon to see
Or someone else
On the opposite balcony'
With a little smile
painted on his lips...

I wish he stayed up
just like I did
To make this night special
He just had to look up in my
Eyes & smile
I would melt away
into that land of dreams
Where I meet him every day...

Where Every night is special
Every day is a wonder
Where his kisses create magic
Where his tongue creates havoc
Every touch burns my skin
Every breath spreads fire...


So what if I live in a desert
& there is no soul miles away
I can always dream about a hunk
Living right opposite my bay
Such a day might never come
But it comes every night
As I walk down my balconey
Looking for some light....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Every mans bane summarized so succinctly Not that am sad - That I am not Just not happy

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Kesav Easwaran 15 January 2009

a day break spotted in the darkness of night...the day and the night will soon merge in...good write, Ash...reflective sadly romantic...10

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

i like the concept. very nice piece.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 January 2009

The light will come to you soon Ash, enlightening your world of loneliness.Sometimes you don't need miracles to happen.Good job Ash.

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