On Being Busy Poem by Azure Critic

On Being Busy

Rating: 5.0


1.
I try to find time to be with U.
U ask why I am so unoccupied.
My joys bruise.

2.
I haven't written a poem for five years.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
myra k. rogers 12 April 2009

The same words.How can I comment a poem if I do not do it also into a poem? I try to think the time/ to be with you is option/but vital/ I am so busy with the clouds/ and cannot write anything/ my word must be heavy full of truth...

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