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Once Upon A Summer Day

Once upon a Summer day,
Birds chirped in a musical way,
Grass drenched in the morning dew,
The sky covered in a vast color of blue.

Once upon a summer day,
Flowers bloomed in full array,
Bright rays of sunlight spilled
Upon my garden on the hill.

Once upon a summer day,
Thunder rumbled and prolonged its stay,
But after the rain tumbled down,
This summer day wore a glorious rainbow crown.

Submitted: Sunday, June 19, 2005
Edited: Friday, August 19, 2005


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  • Isaac Brunson (7/26/2007 3:09:00 PM)

    A+ Joe! Good feel there, any chance of writing a longer one?

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  • Isaac Brunson (7/26/2007 3:09:00 PM)

    A+ Joe! Good feel there, any chance of writing a longer one?

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