indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Once Upon A Time... - Poem by indira babbellapati

once upon a time
the sky bloomed
with stars guiding
once upon a time
there were rains
at the appointed time
once upon a time
the moonlight spread
evenly on all terrains
once upon a time
the flowers blossomed
the trees bore fruit
and everything in plenty
once upon a time
the earth moved on its axis
the way it should

now
when stars are hardly sighted
now
when there's no moonlight visible
now
when all we know are cyclonic storms
now
when we rarely get to see a flower smiling
now
when we eat fruit synthetically ripened
now
when the earth keeps jolting on its axis

will any believe my once upon a story?

30jul2010
14.00hrs


Comments about Once Upon A Time... by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 6,962 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/28/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    We keep moving farther and farther from things natural. Nicely stated. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 41 Points Leonard Dabydeen (8/3/2010 12:08:00 AM)

    Yes, I do. Once Upon a Time will always be an enclave in the architecture of your mind. Ever wonder why?

    Blessings.

    Leonard (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (7/30/2010 4:27:00 AM)

    Once upon a time we would click and write a comment. The same is with earth too. good diction.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 7, 2010


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