Love that I long
Can never go wrong
I have nourished
To witness fruits before I perish
How waves go up and come down!
"How you care me "is well known
Your heart aches and feels pain
I always try to stay near or remain
I feel your silent breathe
That reminds me to be with
Never to desert you in critical days
I must get you on right way
Together we swim and sink too
This is very much true
You are my beacon
Glide path for boat to move on
I get hint when you are in trouble
My heart experience and struggle
It is none but you alone
That shall be brought to me or flown
Let us be one, bodily and share
I think it shall be simple and fair
Why do we wait and worry ever?
I think we need to be one forever
I love the thought of this poem. One forever is a remarkable thought that talks about stability; something which is kind of forgotten in the so-called race of change. The poet wishes stability in relationship, which has also become very fragile, hollow and mechanical. In my opinion, the poem is not judgemental, it appears to me as a wish. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Jun 2,2014
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i like it David Paul4 minutes ago but i new what your next line would be some times thats why 4
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love that I long Can never go wrong