One Last Time Poem by saloni shevya

One Last Time



Its the last time i am writing to you
My feelings all along i wish you knew
I will alwayz live with the memories shared with you
But i am not sure if you will too...

I don't know what to write
My mind and heart seems to have a fight
Where my mind tells to let go
At the same time my heart screams 'no'

The overnight talks, the giggles all through
All the love confessions, god i'll miss them too
Now your heart is not mine, it hurts me so bad
May you live your life happily, while i remain sad

Things didn't work out, you know this too
No matter what we say no matter what we do
Its better we both say goodbye
But the memories are so sweet, they really make me cry

Love is something so deeply beautiful
And thats how you made me feel
Though today love feels like a crime
Just let me say 'i love you' one last time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kazi Ahmed 28 September 2011

'My mind and heart seems to have a fight'______very poetic. Good construction.Words chosen very carefully.Rhythm is there. Thanks. Read my poem and comment.

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Saloni Shevya 03 October 2011

kazi thnx fr d beautiful comment

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Saloni Shevya 03 October 2011

thnx for these wndrful wrds aamit! ...i'll ponder upon it.. :)

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Saloni Shevya 03 October 2011

kazi...sure i'll read your poem asap..nd thnx fr a beautiful comment..! !

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Saloni Shevya 03 October 2011

yoonoos..thnk u! ..

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2011

Sorrows mourning the loss of someone.Forget sorrows with the smokes of upcoming Delhi Diwali coz` there are more as sorrows waiting in the wings..You cannot give yourself individual moral support until you get not rid of this-sorrows.Their inertia of resting character is more a foe than the one person who has left you reasonably or another way unreasonably.

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