One More Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

One More



Because of thunderous blow
My fortune was poorly scolded
Welcome to better chances
Let me try not to depress!

Because of suffers gathering
My soul was over struggling
Welcome to mirthful bliss
Let me try to be fit!

Because of evil smiles
My mind was growing wild
Welcome to angel from the blue
Let me try not to lose clue!

Because of your sudden betrayal
My heart was broken to multiples
Welcome to new-born love
Let me try to catch my own dove!

According to our nature
We had to be, once, failures
Should we give up easily?
Should we fight back bravely?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sunny Rose 04 September 2012

I think the title 'One More' is inappropriate by the way you presented your poem I know it's about not giving up and doing it one more to succeed but...i kinda tnink the title doen't suite your poem

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Zero Ro 04 September 2012

Nice one! It's a good spiritual poem.

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