One More Damn Day Poem by Rick Elpers

One More Damn Day

Rating: 5.0


The morning's loneliness
Cold crisp air
Faded sun shine
A pallor spread within
My breath shallow
Hope exists as smoke
Expectation watches the play
Around me wondering
If ever it will include me
Not knowing it will
I'm done caring anymore
I await my eternal sleep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara 15 November 2012

This poem is amazing in explaining the simple feelings of..living in a never ending day, waiting for the end, wanting to give up, being hopeless..We have all been there, you're not alone.

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