One-Sided Love Poem by Nosheen Irfan

One-Sided Love

Rating: 5.0


I saw him, I fell, I couldn't get up
It was love like rain that never goes up again
His smile ensnared me, I couldn't move
A step forward I strove, I longed to be free

But I was rooted, too deep to fly away
A curve made me a captive from day to day
I felt my path would never be straight again
In the ocean of love, I would forever stray

His eyes acknowledged my existence
But his silence was loud like crashing waves
Perhaps like water I should never tire
Rock will finally change shape and color

Wednesday, February 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: unrequited love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An old poem that i wrote for my celebrity crush.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2019

A fabulous poem....wonderful imagination! I just delve into the depth of your expression....'his silence was loud like crashing waves' Just brilliant.......10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2022

The last line s

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 February 2019

.....''In the ocean of love, I would forever stray His eyes acknowledged my existence But his silence was loud like crashing waves All men are scared of women till she looks directly into his eyes and smiles Lady IRFAN your name is well known Kindly evaluate my poem MOMS SMILES Thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 February 2019

In the ocean of love, I would forever stray His eyes acknowledged my existence But his silence was loud like crashing waves

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2019

It happens, Almighty has blessed everyone with some or the other qualities and they carry an aura around, the life of this crush is similar to that of bubbles. A fantastic poem.

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Kostas Lagos 13 February 2019

Well written poem! Really well written

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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