hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,746 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Only Rising Sun - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Never stop
After reaching top
That is not an end
Bow before lord and bend

Time and tide
No to decide
Result
But offer chance to build

Make sure
Each moment is future
Miss chance
And you are lost at once

So keep moving
And removing
Any hurdle
That causes troubles

Keep in sight
What seems right?
Throw the garbage away
And resolutely manage the way

People may follow
And allow
Only rising man
If they have any reason


Comments about Only Rising Sun by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    Sweetpie Acido Dayo, Pallavi Chaturvedi and 2 others like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2014 7:33:00 AM)

    Good work


    Kelly Nelson12 minutes ago
    I like this inspirational poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2014 7:32:00 AM)

    On the move.


    Emmanuel Bandoh8 minutes ago
    Do the right thing in life, and forget about the bad; what the writer calls garbage.
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2014 7:32:00 AM)

    Must improve


    Michael GonzalesLess than a minute ago
    I get the message but it can still be improved. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Never stop
    After reaching top (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 24, 2014



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