Only You Don't Know Poem by zeenat singh

Only You Don't Know

Rating: 5.0


There are more tears in my eyes rather than sea
Even the god knows the reason for this.
Only you don't worry or think of me
Every leaf knows my situation except you.
The whole night I was awake
Kept thinking about you I swear I couldn't sleep.
I was awake to sleep storm till my heart
Finally the heart decided to leave heartbeat.
And it left the heart broken in it
It took all the happiness.
Your love left away only the pain
Every leaf knows my condition except you
You don't know only, only you.

Thursday, March 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

This poem has so much poetic expression in it and i really appreciate the way you write it as much how emotional this can be, a heartfelt poem. Well done. Aside from that you have to find your happiness back to its home, heart because if it forget to find a way for long you may find it astray....take your time and heal to live better even its hard.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2018

There is tear in eyes and this waves like a sea does. Sadness is amazingly expressed in this brilliantly penned poem that brings emotion....10

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