Metaphorically Speaking


Origami - Poem by Metaphorically Speaking

Chrisp are the crinkles
deep wrinkles

Rectangle

edges
sharp as a blade

permanently pressed

try as one may
creases remain

Behold the beauty
artisan placed

in every fold
painstakingly

When attempting
to smooth out
paper crane


Comments about Origami by Metaphorically Speaking

  • Bronze Star - 2,848 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/7/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    Aha a unique crispy crinkling cracking good poem. I say, Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,086 Points Mandolyn ... (7/19/2014 2:56:00 PM)

    wow, i don't think i've ever read a poem on origami.
    it was originally organic! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 19, 2014


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