Treasure Island

Metaphorically Speaking

On It's Way

'On It's Way'

my spirit



Ride the thermals
in spiral motion


Free of gravity

Feather floating
rocking gently
to and fro

Dandelion fluff
in a deep breath

in a puff

drifting off somewhere

sky diver


With no preconceived notions

in mid-air
make a wish

send it on its way

happy landings

Submitted: Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 18, 2014

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Treasure your courage, find your dream and land your reality, you will grow as much as you want it be...a believe to restore_Soul (Report) Reply

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