Original Fame Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Original Fame

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We believe in past
All glory that has lasted
For our forefathers
And other leaders

Many shed their lives
For freedom they believed
Nature existed then also
They insisted even after that

Humanity had deep roots
But then also people made loot
They robbed poor
Shown always the exist door

We have nothing to show
And certainly grow
In new environment
With happiest moments

Nature perform to their best
With all the experience of bad tests
Clouds showers with last drop
Even if monsoon flops

Original fame remains
Gold never lose shine
Same is case with humanity
That shall last with best quality

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We believe in past All glory that has lasted

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nice bhee maa8 minutes ago nice

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I like the honesty i feel in this poem Amy Wilbee1 minute ago Although in stanza 3 line four I believe you misspelled a word, though I may be wrong. It is a fantastic piece. Comment 2 Comments0

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pazhani bharathi xnature perform...but we make dust storm... nobody do reform...however we transform.. inspiring write 7 May by pazhani bharathi | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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