Other Stars Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Other Stars



Tingles is point
referenced
unseen felt
pulling in away
lite you gaze
inward at
breath
is
gasp twas early
cosmos tunneled cave
fighting unknowing
youth hotly air catches
fire
is bursting star hands lent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter J White 15 April 2009

If your nom de plume is a question - my answer is 'no'. 'Fire is bursting star hands lent' is not even English, or at least not a variety we can understand. Please explain.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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