hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,296 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Our Children - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

They are not only smart
But form very good start
Each puzzle is solved
And life's mystery is

What do they suggest?
When act as best
It is eagerness to know
And very fast attempt to grow

World moves fast
So the time races to last
Children try to cope
So in life never proves flop

Sharp and intelligent as they are
They stay in door but look at far
Stars and moon does not appeal
They want knowledge and that too real

We fail at each stage
We are down with age
Now subjects are vast and new
We watch child’s growth and view

I feel happy when they counter
With sold argument and offer
Their version with logic and fairness
Being ignorant, I bring smile on face


Comments about Our Children by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/15/2013 10:34:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez and JaiRam Tiwari like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/15/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    good use of words

    Racheal Champion22 minutes ago
    haha.. true and meaningful... nice job
    Comment +1
    amazing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/15/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    K.J. Maarten22 minutes ago
    i have no place to say much
    Comment +1
    children grow to fast and they go through many stages of life and we hold a special place in our heart for them. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/15/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    Sharon Poss14 minutes ago
    I like the way the person wrote this poem from the different stages of life and how they explained the what we all go through and want to experience growing up........ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/15/2013 8:42:00 PM)

    They are not only smart
    But form very good start (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 15, 2013



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