Patrick Villareal

Rookie (10/27/93 / Rancho Cucumonga)

Our Family, My Family - Poem by Patrick Villareal

Our family, My family, so broken and divided are we
So caught up with anger amongts ourselves, so much we cannot see
So focused on bitter disputes and drawn out battle lines
Still trying to achieve victory against these unbreakable vines
Stuck in the murkey water trying to get free
Our family, my family so broken and divided are we


Comments about Our Family, My Family by Patrick Villareal

  • Rookie - 152 Points Marcus Mckinley (10/18/2011 10:33:00 AM)

    nicely done. i like the reality of your poem. it fits in most peoples family situations. just remember it only takes one to gather the pieces and it takes all to put them together. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 17, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 18, 2011


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