***our Love*** Poem by negar shahnouri
***our Love***
some people fight and break up
for others its as easy as breaking a tea cup.
u loved me and yet i am your lover
so tell me why we are leaving eachother
s.th has changed since a day i dont remember
maybe since that 'f' day u saw her
one day will come u'll call me by my last name
and i will smile to ur new gf, what a shame
ur new relations, my new last name, our new lives
did u say u still love me?
me 2 but lets dont forget ur dear wife! !
, , , And some people love noone! Some people like you! ! ! ! ! !
Another thought provoking piece. Too young? One-sided love? It takes more than love? I like the inclusion of the “lets don’t forget ur dear wife ” But all the hmmm? ? ? ?
emmm dear poet full of grammatical mistakes.. but the message is clear. you have a big heart to love so don't care about him, your words told me that he hurts u, it isn't my business, but life is great so leave it, and find someone who really love u....and, , , smile and keep smiling :) Yasser by theway thanx for your comment
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4/27/2024 5:57:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
ur are very lovely my friend.. u amazing! great poem! outstanding write!