A Simple Wish Poem by negar shahnouri

A Simple Wish

Rating: 4.8


i wish i had a house and a son
the only angel who could call me mom

1 bedroom with too much light
and a balcon for our romantic night

it should have a yard and hoaz(it means pond in my language)
beside it must be a thornless rose

our feet in water, ur hands in mine
my dream turn lighter, ur eyes do shine

ah, ,
my time 4 wishing is running out
just i wish i had not this broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 23 September 2008

very beautuful poem, , , sweet simple...i especially love the start and mid.very touching

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Tj Becker 23 September 2008

wonderful poem of wishes, Your heart will mend and wishes come true. Good write

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Char Pattrick 26 September 2009

Easy to read and visualise as you have written it well.

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

i wish i had a house and a son the only angel who could call me mom nice expression you used good one

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Anna jonson 26 September 2008

what a wish.....and what a poem

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

A beautiful poem, lovely piece. Love it,10+

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 September 2008

a touching poem, thanks for sharing

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