I Broke Again! Poem by negar shahnouri
I Broke Again!
I feel like am back to zero,
To where I started from.
My heart is wierd place once again.
It hurts a lot; I can't even hold a pen.
i have been so weak from inside n out.
I feel like I want to loudly shout.
I dnt have the smallest happiness or glory.
i think am to a point where nothing can make me feel more sorry.
am sorry i hurt you.
am sorryi made you go through this.
I never meant to do whati did.
My feelings have nt changed and they r still like before.
Just tht i have become shallow and empty like a shore.
Tell me who can Feel worse than me now
Even if they exist, am sure im the first in this row
Wake me up from this nightmare
Plz show me some more care...................
Very lovely piece dear shahnouri.Thanks a lot for sharing your feeling with us.Live in your soul.Be happy with your soul.
Sometimes Ms Arian writes about the needs and so I shall write a little about them myself. People need the honesty, the freshness, the energy, the immediacy, the truth that appear in this poem. I wrote too good things and so shall end with a different thought: Ms Arian needs trust in herself. Isn't a negative thought, is it?
Passionate writing........I really liked this piece....I don't agree with Becker..you kept the right tone for the feelings; ; ; I think it was deliberate...........
I have to be honest with you. This poem was a quality write, but one suggestion. Complete your words when you write don't shorten them. It takes away from the good write that it is. Grammar and punctuation really does put the polish on a good poem.; -) this was very good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 6:16:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nigar, I value your emotion. So added my 10 to it. It is a lovely composition with emotion, simple and painful too. Love it.