Our Parting Time Poem by Maryum Fatyma

Our Parting Time

Rating: 5.0


Not the day was dark

But actually my day was,

Not the time was bad

But actually my time was,

Not the decision was tough

But actually my decision was,

Not the words were hard to say

But maybe my heart was hard,

Not the big heart was so unkind

But actually the heart was big!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my friend-love!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Maryum. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Suman Kumar Das 30 December 2013

technically soothing......., ...............liked it

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