Our Work Of Art. Poem by Hailey Marie

Our Work Of Art.

Rating: 3.5


Blood stained sheets,
What have I gotten myself into this time?
I close my eyes and I believe you.
If I should die I'll never leave you.
I wish that I could walk away.
Guilt rests in my hands.
I know that it is for the better.
I never said that I'd compromise,
Between fact or fiction.
There's so much better out there.
Than you and me.
I could end this in seconds,
I know it but I don't dare.
Another sentence this all could be over,
Your words are like weapons why can't you protect me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 September 2008

I had to give this a seven because I'm not sure I understood it. I think I might, but that is not enough. You have to comprehend what the poem says and I don't. Greenwolfe 1962

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Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

Wow hailey its pretty good

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Hailey Marie

Hailey Marie

Brampton, Ontario - Canada
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