Out Of Any Action Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Out Of Any Action

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Never did anyone on me some tricks
As it will always first strike
My mind may start working
I was fortunate to have it as liking

I am fond of her as everybody may be
She has appeal, feels frank and free
To mingle with idea of her own
She is known for her quick quality to disown

It is personality that attracts
Rest all are same acts
Person does for his own satisfaction
Nobody can be blamed for any reasons

I have heard remarks
But embarked upon to start
A close liaison
With clear vision

If she has any of the formidable weapon
I too shall have the clear design
In mind to make her miss the goal or aim
I had no desire to earn bad fame

Person may die at any time
Death is destiny but blamed sometimes
For the cause that was apparent
In fact not real but absent

Wish I could be her last laugh
As she was to become my best half
I had desired to be her victim
Her eyes were like sun’s beam

I believed fully in faith
That ultimate destination is death
That can come from any direction
Love failure, sickness or out of any action

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Never did anyone on me some tricks As it will always first strike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

beautiful Daina Smitley10 minutes ago a beautiful love story that I thought seemed kind of incomplete, like a cliff hanger.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Cooper John8 minutes ago Hard to follow at times but a discernable feeling is there. Comment 0 Like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Nicki Jennings11 minutes ago Very confusing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Excellent, but needs rhythm Aimee LaFon12 minutes ago Great content, lacks rhythm and flow. Or to say it better, lacks unity. Comment 0 Last paragraphs seem to be out of context

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Dorielyn Sta. Cruz12 minutes ago Poem was talking about a woman, but death suddenly in the 2 paragraphs towards the end. Or is woman = death?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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