Out Of Fear! Poem by Nirmala Kanagasabapathy

Out Of Fear!

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The dark wind and the ruffling leaves,

The howling mongrels at the corner streets,

The ticking noise and the time that fleets,

The beads of sweat at the heart that bleats,

The tranquil hour and the door that creaks,

The night of stress and the dramatic twists,

ALL vanquished by the twilight mists!

Tuesday, August 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 02 August 2016

Nice hallucinatory picture excellently crafted accurately placing aptly chosen phases, takes us through a series of scenes in a horror film. Well done Nirmala. Lets have more of the kind. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Nirmala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Akram Mohamed 03 August 2016

Beautiful words that smoothly blends; Congrats on penning this one, my dear friend!

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:) :) :)

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Menato San 03 August 2016

Amazing piece.Nice work. Thanks for sharing

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Thanks Menato :)

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Chinedu Dike 02 August 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem insightfully brought forth. Thanks for sharing Nirmala.

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Thanks Chinedu. That was so encouraging :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2016

Your first posted poem is wonderful, Nirmala. I hope to see more Peace

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Thanks Kelly :)

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