Christian Hudak


Out Of Space, Out Of Time - Poem by Christian Hudak

For I am not lost
I have been here before
Adrift in the darkest void
A somber vacuum will enrich all
Between each life, you have one aim
Ferry light with you

Voyaging amid an aging macrocosm
Will indeed trial your courage
Wrapped in a blanket of frigid shadows
The roar of absolute zero thunders all over
Echoes resonate, off what? Off where?


Comments about Out Of Space, Out Of Time by Christian Hudak

  • Veteran Poet - 1,054 Points Michelle Claus (6/19/2014 1:12:00 PM)

    The feeling evoked is out of space and out of time. In starkness I am comforted by *Ferry light with you*... The shifting pronouns (from I to You) could be resolved by converting them all to We / Us - more collective, and consistent. I love this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 46,737 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/30/2014 10:38:00 PM)

    very fine, please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 30, 2014



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