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(P) 17 (SUFIYANA) YOU HAVE GONE

You have gone
But You are here with me
I have abosrbed the fragrance of Your being
Your presence is inside me.My soul can feel it
Sometimes it permeates outside.Others can feel it too
Sometimes it condenses in a dropp of beauty dancing inside me
Sometimes it opiates me and gently rolls me in a land of gossamer dreams
Sometimes it races up to my heart and bursts into a song and i write it down

Submitted: Saturday, June 09, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 09, 2011

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  • Geoff Warden (6/14/2007 7:32:00 PM)

    Add my vote to this one young songstess, this verse sings of the must fervent notes and is flowing like a stream unto its' river....

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/9/2007 5:14:00 PM)

    Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so
    very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O.

    FjR

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/9/2007 5:14:00 PM)

    Effulgent imagery abounds this beautiful work, young lady! ...Smoooooth, and so
    very quelling...Very solid crafting, T.O.

    FjR

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