Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(a) 47 (Love/Passion) Beware, My Love... - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Beware, my Love
Of the thunder
That we will encounter
When we touch

Beware, my love
Of the Rain
The outpourings of the pain
For the lost time

Beware, my love
Of the lightning
The resurrection that it will bring
Of our dormant desires

Beware, my Love
Of the flood
The mingling of our blood
When our skins dissolve

Beware, my Love
Of the reverbration
The resounding celebration
Of Our eternal Embrace


Comments about (a) 47 (Love/Passion) Beware, My Love... by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (4/21/2009 5:42:00 AM)

    electric dreams........loved it.............. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Max Reif (6/9/2007 11:13:00 AM)

    This one's very skillful in rhyme and meter, as well as in thematic development and substance. I suspect you didn't start writing yesterday!
    I may be too fastidious, but I don't get the 'beware' in the very last stanza.
    (though you may have reasons, and I should perhaps realize them. Because we all fear the lack of conflict and limitation?) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (6/9/2007 4:54:00 AM)

    Oooooohhhhhh! There's electricity in these (perfectly expressed) words.... t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Ernestine Northover (2/7/2007 4:08:00 PM)

    Beautifully expressed piece TO. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, a clever write and excellently thought out. Applause! ! ! ! ! !
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,596 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (2/7/2007 5:05:00 AM)

    Lots of depth to this work, T.O.>>>TIGHT, CRISP STRYCTURING HAS BEEN A COMMONPLACE FOR YOUR ARTISTRY & THIS PIECE IS OF NO EXCEPTION!
    sOLID wORK, MY DEAR...
    fRANK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (2/7/2007 4:30:00 AM)

    Love the intensity of this poem TO, the way you compare the power of love to the forces of nature. Stunning. Justine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danny Reynolds (2/7/2007 3:37:00 AM)

    A wonderful reminder of the awsome power, which demands respect but can bring such rewards. Thanks for this.
    Danny (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 9, 2011


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