Oh yes, I admit openly
That I love you really
From heart and mind
As you were very kind
You were one of the best
Compared to the rest
You never showed disregard
That was good to move forward
You were simple and sober
That was sought after
I was after it since long
You have prove it right and me a wrong
What do we desire after all?
Worldly attachment for honest call
Live together and spend the time
That only helps all the time
Big things are said in general
They need simple dismissal
We need to be straight and simple
As life must invite no more troubles
It should not be laden with worries
So it proves burden to carry
Pain and struggle is different part
We are all here for very good start
passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1
passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1
passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1
I like it the thoughts are grant. stan brierly8 hours ago Well written from the heart Comment +1
i like it Mbalentle Ganca8 hours ago woow its nice well structured
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Oh yes, I admit openly That I love you really