Juan Olivarez

Freshman - 774 Points (september 12 / nyssa oregon)

Pale - Poem by Juan Olivarez

Pale blue clouds, in a pale blue sky,
Pale sea birds, fly every which way.
O'er the pale blue sea, they softly fly,
Throughout the pale blue day.

Pale brown grass, withering alone,
Amid the sand dunes dying.
Pale as a sun bleached animal bone,
As you hear the sea breeze sighing.

Pale grey mist upon the sea,
Slowly creeping to the shore.
Pale giant tarpons jumping free,
As the pale Atlantic, gently roars.

12/3/11 Alton Texas


Comments about Pale by Juan Olivarez

  • Silver Star - 3,395 Points Smoky Hoss (12/6/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    This poem is more than 'pale', it is beautiful! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (12/4/2011 10:40:00 PM)

    This poem is absolutely beautiful with wonderful imagery! ! Bravo! !
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 3, 2011



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