i hear of the place
from every mouth in my place
even those who never believed
have babbled of the land
a place where the virtous rest
for some thousand years at birth
which in truth is after death
a land of milk and honey bless
and beautiful dansel of blazing dress
where all mans want
at his feet are dropped
o! unearthly land
what i will give to live in you
nice. for someone your age you see things differently than i did back then
Simply beautiful or pretty I'm not sure I like this one as well
paradise, a place where all the good souls want to end up...beautifly described, a nice imagination. Excellent
an honest desire...aptly written...be careful of the occasional typo...
This poem is great...i really like it a lot. I like the hidden meanings that are with-in it! Keep It UP^^^! ! ! =)
the way you write your poems.. simple yet powerful! i like the word choices.. you really have a gift!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
can't forget about death? beautiful, wish i knew more~