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Peace

Peace
Peace to release dove
Peace to lease love
Peace to piece heart
Peace to decrease smart
Peace to increase justice
Peace to cease injustice
Lack of conscience
Caprice
War

Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008
Edited: Friday, July 16, 2010


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  • Nora Eason (11/24/2008 10:55:00 PM)

    great job, keep up the good work.

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  • Brenda Tamayo (11/18/2008 10:25:00 PM)

    We need more peace in the world.

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (11/18/2008 10:17:00 PM)

    Peace would be really nice.A ten from me.

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  • Alison Cassidy (11/18/2008 6:27:00 PM)

    A delightful play on words with a strong message. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Annie Girl (11/17/2008 11:02:00 PM)

    nice :) its short but in the poem it said it all wonderful

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  • Krista Churchill (11/17/2008 10:05:00 PM)

    nice and short I love peace this was a good poem..

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  • Seema Chowdhury (11/17/2008 7:55:00 PM)

    simple and short but strong emotions and words. well done.

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  • Fiona Davidson (11/17/2008 1:31:00 PM)

    Powerful use of words...love it...Fi

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (11/17/2008 12:18:00 PM)

    peace for all beautifull flowers's love to nightingle of shiraz! ! ! :)
    10+++++

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  • Meggie Gultiano (11/17/2008 7:44:00 AM)

    a nice write, indeed.Wonderful

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