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Karin Anderson
(5/14/2009 8:05:00 AM) |
This is absolutely wonderful writing. You not only used such smooth and polished words, but you
got into the psyche of the photographer and reiterated his creativity with your poem. Wonderful work! 10 Karin Anderson
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Mark Slaughter
(3/8/2009 3:58:00 AM) |
Yet another professional master piece Mary. I hope you write more....
Mark
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Sid John Gardner.
(12/12/2008 7:04:00 AM) |
I can honestly say that your writing is one of the best (In my humble opinion) on this site) . Wonderful.
Sid xxx
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C. P. Sharma
(11/30/2008 8:49:00 AM) |
Mary,
An awesome poem. Nature is an amazing photographer.
The pebbles on the sea shore
Are story of slashes of the sea,
Rounding and polishing them
As fine tapestry for your glee.
So, the Nature rounds up
Angularities of all man,
It works up everything
Keeping a perfect plan.
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Sarwar Chowdhury
(11/12/2008 12:37:00 PM) |
Ammmazing compsition with fine rhyme and rhythm.....10+++
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Aiswarya. T.anish
(10/4/2008 8:21:00 AM) |
A photograph of pebbles on the shore;
Smooth, basking pebbles, polished by the sea
WONDERFUL LINES
NICE POEM. I LOVED IT
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Fay Slimm
(9/13/2008 1:27:00 AM) |
An excellent composition Mary. It is so good to read aloud, and ends with another potent message. Keep writing. love Fay.
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~ Jon London ~
(5/31/2008 10:33:00 AM) |
beautifully composition Mary....your expression dances along the words...perfect rhythmic flow...great job.
best wishes
Jon
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