Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Peerless Poetess - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

all these blank verses
she was about to voice
under aegis of love
O dear, look alive!

above wandering earth and sky
it goes its own righteous way
it’s relaxed more and more
we will remember evermore

stay with me
O baby, stay with me
thank you, my baby
for loving me

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Hema Kadir)

Comments about Peerless Poetess by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • Rookie - 155 Points Michael Gale (6/23/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    Nicely done.

    Of the world, of poetry. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,488 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/31/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    a nice feelig written in nice way. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (5/30/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    We should all indeed give thanks especially to those who love us.. well done Alf (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (5/24/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    stay with me
    O baby, stay with me
    thank you, my baby
    for loving me
    This is the burden of every song at the end. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (5/23/2009 7:07:00 PM)

    a nice dedication to a nice poetess..cheers, , naizz (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points Saadat Tahir (5/23/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    hi Ahmad

    its so nice to say kind an nice words about our own community...and written so well

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (5/23/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    You have penned great poems of dedication i am just wondering why all poems now coming from you have the same end stanzas......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 23, 2009

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