Pencil Poem by Jasmine Black

Pencil

Rating: 4.8


The tool that lets me express myself
When I need it most
The tool that allows me to breathe
When it feels like I am drowning
The tool that helps me keep my sanity
When I feel like I'm losing it
The tool I would be lost without

Sunday, November 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 November 2015

good one, tool I would be lost without..

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Chinedu Dike 14 December 2015

Good train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely depiction of the therapeutic effects of writing, a beautiful tribute to the pencil. Thanks for sharing Jasmine. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 07 December 2015

This is your best poem so far. I prefer to use a pen myself (see my poem O HOMEM DA CANETA [PEN MAN]) , but pencils are great tools and have the advantage of being able to be erased. When I make a mistake with my pen, I just cross it out and continue. I have tried erasable pens but never yet found one I liked. Keep writing, Jasmine.

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Kelly Kurt 23 November 2015

You are in good company

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 November 2015

A beautiful tribute paid to pencil, a tool of poets expression. Gratitude displayed for the tool displays the sensitivity and tenderness of the poet. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Chuy Amante 22 November 2015

Weed? LOL great to imagine

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Kelly Kurt 23 November 2015

Sometimes.: -)

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