People Poem by Tia BraveBull Bredeson

People

Rating: 5.0


My People
our halls
walkin with heads
held high
Wearing black
People look
Dont dare to talk back
cuz they'll get smacked
thats a fact
So dont ask
we all hide behind masks
all have tasks
to get through each
and every day
thats our way
What do you got to say?
Hope you make it through
today
Why? ! ! dont i say
this again
Get out of my face
You major PREP! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 22 November 2008

A poem indicating a heavy atmosphere of repression and giving up to fate! Should it be like this!

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Nellie Bredeson 18 November 2008

I like your poem very well written.

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Billy Joe Collins 18 November 2008

interesting poem show a touch of anger well wrote

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