Blood! ! Poem by Tia BraveBull Bredeson

Blood! !



I was going to commit suicide
was what I was going to do
this weekend
I'm tired of speaking
like I'm all fine
when I'm not
Sitting here crying
Tired of lying
to myself
Its my fault
Derek died
I should've joined
a suicide cult
I dont ******* care
anymore
I'm just going to walk out that door
onto the stage, put that gun to my head
Pull the trigger & then I'm dead
I'm lying on the floor
my blood spilling all around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nellie Bredeson 19 May 2009

Um? wat can i say? that was a very deep poem but i think u should talk to someone about wat ur feeling. even if u think that they won't care they do. trust me they do. and u shouldn't blame yourself for something that you had no control over. well like i said. very deep poem.

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Cerys Grant 11 May 2009

Was this poem inspired by a personal experience?

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