Perplexed Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Perplexed

Rating: 5.0


Areyoubewildered
.....or baffled & unsure?
Maybe, puzzled or confused
...Lost, don't know where you "were"?

Is it complicated or understated?
.....Involved & entangled in a mess?
Are you uncertain of the situation?
...And don't want to confess?

Well, my gut is talking again
.....And it ain't never been wrong-
But i'll go along with your answer
...i will play along.

Just remember when troubles come tumblin'
.....And harsh words make it worse-
That forgiveness, empathy & love
...Will surely remove this "Perplexed Curse".

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 05 February 2018

Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. But did you sneak into my brain and look around? ? ? I find this a compassionate poem that also gives a helping hand- - That forgiveness, empathy & love ...Will surely remove this Perplexed Curse.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Blessings on that pen of yours, Theo, and on your heart. 10

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Theodora Onken 14 December 2017

Thank you Pam for reading and commenting. Love your new name but more than that - - i love your poetry! ! ! ! It is entirely different - - and it rocks. Welcome back, dear POET. More please!

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Jette Blackstone 23 December 2017

Hi Theo. Thanks! :) I'm glad you like my new name. It helped me out of writer's block and made me feel free...though I hope I don't upset anyone with the change. :) Take care. Pam

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Jette Blackstone 11 December 2017

Forgiveness, Empathy, and Love are the best cures for these curses...and they don't even cost a dime. Thanks Theo. Pam (Jette)

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