Pick Me Up And Listen To Me... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Pick Me Up And Listen To Me...

Rating: 5.0


On million waves, I travelled across
Emerged from the darkness of the sea

I am still waiting for someone to pick me up
And listen to and see what I hold

Before I submerge again in this deep sea
Someone please pick me up and listen to me.

Thursday, September 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 29 July 2020

Wow Pick me up, and listen to me. I want you to hear my wants and desires.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 September 2018

Very movingly expressed, beautiful flow! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Muzahidul Reza 21 September 2018

Pick Me Up And Listen To Me... yes it is he prayer of all the people in general, ..... but what do the powers holders do? they fell me more down and go forward treading me (people in general): your imagery poem is clear reading the title, well done, thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2018

Thanks much Muzahidul Reza

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 September 2018

Wants and desires of life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2018

Thx much my friend Edward

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2018

Travelling across millions of waves you have perceived interesting things. Darkness and hotness of the seashore will not last for long time. Beauty of wisdom will motivate mind. A brilliant poem basing on perception is well penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2018

Thx Much Sir Kumarmani ji

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