Picnic On The Hills Poem by Rajagopalan Kumar

Picnic On The Hills

Rating: 5.0


The dark mountain road climbs its way
Like a great snake winds round its prey
Shining black in the simmering sun
Spotted by wayside trees on its run
Inching its strangle on the mountain rock
Gobbled out when we reach the plateau park.


Up above the world so high
Into the kingdom of the sky
Smoky tufts of grays and blues
Fly past to reveal a myriad views.



Icy cold, cheerful joy to young and old
Air and icy dew, so clear and fresh
Left deep down the dust and slush
Left far below the worries of the world
Sweet little flowers bloomed around in myriad colors
Sunset horizon view, a cocktail of swirling colors
Hanging snow peaks in a distant sea
A sight for every mortal eye to see.


Rapid cover of darkness of the night
All the twilight mirages out of sight
Armed with sweater and torch
Against the frost and the dark
Enjoy the chill and thrill in a midnight stroll
Far far below some nocturnal prowlers scary cries
Far above a giant bird of steel against the starry skies
Time for a short slumber before the morning call.


The morning sun beckons call to earthly duties
Time to bid adieu to the hill side beauties
Now and then, a picnic to the hills
Keeps away the doctor pills and the bills.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2020

A well executed poem. Truly fabulous....5 stars*****

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Rajagopalan Kumar 15 October 2020

Thanks for your appreciation. Shows your love for Nature also. It s a great thing to appreciate nature

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Valsa George 02 June 2015

Enjoyed this beautiful mountain trek with picturesque description of the scenes around! Now and then, a picnic to the hills Keeps away the doctor pills and the bills......... Endorse these lines!

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Rajagopalan Kumar 03 June 2015

Thanks for the appreciation... Please read my other poems also. Hope you will enjoy them. Once again thanks for your encouraging words

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

A Wonderful Picnic on hills is gone recollecting the sweet moment on hill station as the morning sun beckons call to earthly duties but memories still want to linger on the worthwhile blissful moment spent on beautiful hills station. A beautiful poem that keep ones memories lingering to the sweet moment spent on hill station. Beautiful presentation with bountiful imagery attract the readers attention. Loved reading it.

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Rajagopalan Kumar 03 June 2015

Thanks for your comments and encouraging words...

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