Piercing Eyes (Pt.4) Poem by Rebecca Springsteen

Piercing Eyes (Pt.4)

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She doesn't know how to overcome.
She just watches her own life,
slip away into the past.
The children made her ride their voyages,
she can't become like us.
The Piercing eyes, are the wounded.

Sunday, February 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying,childhood ,lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 February 2016

She doesn't know how to overcome. She just watches her own life, slip away into the past. loneliness portrayed well wounded eyes.. thank you. tony

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Rebecca Springsteen 28 February 2016

Thanks, for totally understanding this poem. It'll make even more sense if you read the other three parts.

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