Pigments Of Love Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Pigments Of Love

Rating: 5.0


My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
Hot blood nor

Are we lost
In the face of destiny
Or full of power?
Spectral colors
Dye the time
Each hour

A second coat of paint
Should cover,
Pigments of love
In her Irises
Discover

2010/1/29

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 29 January 2010

yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10

0 0 Reply
Tsira Goge 30 January 2010

I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10... Kindest regards, Tsira

0 0 Reply
Gillena Cox 04 February 2010

interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :)

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 03 February 2010

Exceptional, my friend. The true poet always gives himself away in words. Blessings from, Sandra

0 0 Reply

A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend.

0 0 Reply
Beauty Philosophy 02 February 2010

A good reflection on the pigments of love.

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Walters 30 January 2010

Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success