Persian Nightingale


Pigments Of Love - Poem by Persian Nightingale

My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
Hot blood nor

Are we lost
In the face of destiny
Or full of power?
Spectral colors
Dye the time
Each hour

A second coat of paint
Should cover,
Pigments of love
In her Irises
Discover

2010/1/29


Comments about Pigments Of Love by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie - 14 Points Gillena Cox (2/4/2010 4:04:00 PM)

    interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (2/3/2010 10:14:00 PM)

    Exceptional, my friend. The true
    poet always gives himself away
    in words.

    Blessings from,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/2/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Beauty Philosophy (2/2/2010 3:29:00 AM)

    A good reflection on the pigments of love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rebecca Walters (1/30/2010 1:15:00 PM)

    Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (1/30/2010 1:04:00 PM)

    I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10...
    Kindest regards,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Emma Adamyan (1/29/2010 2:11:00 PM)

    yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 29, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 9, 2010


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