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Pigments of Love

My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
Hot blood nor

Are we lost
In the face of destiny
Or full of power?
Spectral colors
Dye the time
Each hour

A second coat of paint
Should cover,
Pigments of love
In her Irises
Discover

2010/1/29

Submitted: Friday, January 29, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, February 09, 2010


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  • Gillena Cox (2/4/2010 4:04:00 PM)

    interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :)

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  • Sandra Fowler (2/3/2010 10:14:00 PM)

    Exceptional, my friend. The true
    poet always gives himself away
    in words.

    Blessings from,

    Sandra

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/2/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend.

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  • Beauty Philosophy (2/2/2010 3:29:00 AM)

    A good reflection on the pigments of love.

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  • Rebecca Walters (1/30/2010 1:15:00 PM)

    Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry

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  • Tsira Goge (1/30/2010 1:04:00 PM)

    I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10...
    Kindest regards,
    Tsira

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  • Emma Adamyan (1/29/2010 2:11:00 PM)

    yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10

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