Pit Of Suffering Poem by Darren Harris

Pit Of Suffering

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Disappearing into a vortex,
Into a whirlpool of despair,
My mind is forever falling,
As I grasp for help but no ones there,

But my fight for breath is escalating,
As the demons deep within,
Plummet with me into the darkness,
Into the pit of suffering,

Then I feel my heart beat intensifying,
As it races out of control,
Round and around like a gold fish,
Swimming around in its bowl,

So will somebody help me?
In this madness,
Help me to escape from within,
Throw me a line,
And help me break free,
From the hands in the pit of suffering.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
totally disturbed 19 December 2008

I really like your poems you express your feelings very well.. Wendy

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