Player To Team Poem by M.J. Daniels

Player To Team

Rating: 3.8


We were playing basketball
All players were short and tall.

Pass it, Pass it
I would yell.
I yelled to a player
called Michelle.

When they didn't pass,
we would lose the ball.
and we couldn't get a point
at all

Pass it, Pass it
Pas the Ball!
No one pased,
short or tall.

Ding! Great the game is done,
if you would've passed it to me,
we could have won.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandhya S N 07 August 2009

very well written regards sandhya

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premji premji 04 August 2009

game, as life, is also a matter of sharing and caring...

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Courtney Steele 03 August 2009

nice poem I never seen someone 13 write quite well! ! ! ! *

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very good n nice writen 2 be 13 years old

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