She Might Quit Poem by M.J. Daniels

She Might Quit

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I have a friend on poem hunter
she has gone deep
and under.

She wants to quit
but i asked her
'I thought you said you had fun
doing it? '

She answerd
'Yes I did a long time ago.
My poems used to glow,
But now there all bad
under the snow.

'I have no more ideas
that i know
none of my poems
are starting to glow.'

I told her
'So it doesn't matter if they shine or not.
You said you had fun
making a lot.

Why don't you make one
about your sister
she could have had fun
but it was like she was in a twister.

It's like she's spinning around in circles
no where to go.
all she can do is go with the flow.

She said,
'that wouldn't make me feel ok.'
For some odd reason she
was feeling gray.

**Please help Cathrene Madlambayan get back on her feet
she needs someone to tell her other wise to keep making
poems.Please make her feel Happy. Thank you.**

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 31 July 2009

Poems can be written under a tree in the sunshine... everyone can tell a tale as good as any...kind thoughts nice way to travel nice poeem regards

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sky dreams 30 July 2009

You have a very kind heart, M.J and are clearly a good friend.

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Ben Gieske 30 July 2009

Encouraging others is a worthy pursuit. We all have are dry spells and there is only one way to write better poems and that is to keep reading other good poets and to keep on writing. In regard to your poem, I like these lines: she has gone deep and under. My poems used to glow, But now there all bad under the snow.

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