Who Am I? I'Ll Tell You Poem by M.J. Daniels

Who Am I? I'Ll Tell You

Rating: 4.8


What you see is an ordinary girl,
but don't let your eyes be fooled,
My eyes shine like pearls,
and of I am really cool

I love to play sports
When I play basketball,
and dribble down the coart,
that's what i like to do,
the only sound you'll hear
is the ball going through the net,
and the squeaks from my shoes.

I hope you like the things i descirbed
about me.
Now i gotta go outside
and feel the breeze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 30 July 2009

aha....thats cool.....i play basketball too.... nicely written.... ;)

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Hazem Al Jaber 30 July 2009

sweet lover and great caller to whom you feel love with.. nice one.. keep on.. hazem al..

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i say fine Job young one.... i love it.....

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its a good topic but i think u should have spent more time and detail on urself

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Scarlette Romero 29 July 2009

Well done rhythm...like the way you described ur self on the basketball court.....but u should've used more words to describe urself.....ill give u 8 for effort.

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