Pleasantly Annihilated By Your Magical Presence Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Pleasantly Annihilated By Your Magical Presence

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You’re a young sprite
Making your way through the city
Goddess-like along subway trains
Causing tremulous hearts to palpitate
As you smile and toss your dark hair back
Sighing a lover’s dissatisfied sigh
That would intoxicate the dreams of any male
Until he whimpers and cries.

I’ll take my easel through Parisian streets
And paint the world a new masterpiece,
They’ll see you the way I see you,
They’ll understand why I lie beneath your feet.

My heart is lacerated by the cruel knife
Of this unceasing desire,
Your eyes mercilessly tease me
And torture me with harm,
I may very well cease to exist
If you’re ever on my arm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 02 January 2007

beaucoup de your titles are FANtastic. i'd like to see vous delve more into repetition, U, believe you have a natural flare; it's the lyrical syntazznesss. soin, Sus

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 September 2006

URIAH...LIKE THIS A LOT, ESPECIALLY THE TITLE...(SOMETHING THE HEAP MIGHT HAVE EXPLORED ON) Stellar Imagery and Smooth even-flow throughout...A Fine Penning'''''''''''''''FJR

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Sandra Fowler 08 September 2006

A wonderfully original title. The poem is pure magic as usual. Write on, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra

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